The fine art of poetry

Nalgaroth · Trimis: 06/07/2008 21:30 Titlul subiectului: The fine art of poetry

Cum stateam acum cateva saptamani fara idei, si inotam intru-un butoi cu plictiseala, m-am gandit sa scriu ceva. Am inceput prin a vizita ceva forumuri si siteuri sa vad despre ce este vorba mai concret. Am descoperit ca poemele/poezii sunt facute din experientele precedecente, sau sunt starile emotionale scrise pe hartie.

Si hey, am de cant sa impartasesc toate cele 3 - 4 poeme scrise de mine ( yeeey, aren`t you lucky ).

Macar multumitimi ca stau atat sa le scriu pe toate :P

Black Thoughts ( my 1st one )

Black thoughts keep me away from sleeping
Past memories which corup my mind
I always try to keep my eyes shut
But i cant
I see images of you
And what am i left with ?
Your steps
Your steps on the floor
Surrounded by roses
And as i move further
I can sense your smell
I smell death
But is that enough ?

Hope you enjoy it, more to come.
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Nalgaroth · Trimis: 06/07/2008 21:42 Titlul subiectului:

2nd one

I Embrace Death

Why is it so dark ?
Why cant it all be like it was before ?
But wait
I feel something
Images flow through my mind
Dead bodies
I see dead bodies everywhere
And beneath them
A voice of a little girl
She is crying
As she gets closer, I can see the pain and suffering on her face
Her eyes are bleeding
Then i turn around, but she dissapears
Why must it all be such a mistery ?
The cold whispers of death embrace me
I see doom
I see people struggling to escape
Escape from a place we call hell
But they cant
And as the sky turns black
All signs of humanity vanish
I begin to feel scared
And hope this is just a dream.
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kaos · Trimis: 07/07/2008 13:59 Titlul subiectului:

Va pun 2 poezii de ale mele, a doaua e doar pe jumate

Privirea timpului

In cele di urma,
a fost sa fia asa,
toata iubirea, toata trisetea,
spulberata de privirea timpul

ai stiut ca se va intampla,
eu nu credeam dar a fost asa,
in cele din urma,

dar trecutul e trecut,
si viitorul nu se stie,
timpul trece usor si lin,
dar flacara inca mai este vie

dar nu uita in viata,
dezamagirea poate avea o a doua fata
cred ca iubirea e ca o comoara,
poate fi deschisa o a doua oara.

The spirit of the maiden

Far away from the home
Trough the plains of dead
We were so alone
But she,she was right ahead

Before reaching the light
A demon took our breath
But through the power and might
We bring him to the realm of death

I couldn`t believe my eyes
When i summoned the three bright stars
I thanked the holy skies
She, she was finaly alive

Guide us our maiden of justice and piece,
Bless our souls to fight our enemies
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dizzy · Trimis: 14/07/2008 04:15 Titlul subiectului: Re: The fine art of poetry

555geo666 · Trimis: 15/07/2008 14:47 Titlul subiectului:

Spontaneitate :

Approach...the seed of evil
prevails upon dawn of light
The children of retrieval
Weep upon the darkness that's in sight.

Sleep, forgive and reconcile
Death is just a second away
Nothing's rotten, nothing's vile
In bold courage we shall sway
Upon the moment of relief - None is left.

Morbid silence is refreshing
None are left...death is aloof
All is calm, all is just fine
None disturbed, you see a roof.

All's a dream, you're in your bed
You've been dreaming of the dead
We're together once again
To reak havoc upon them!

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Ceva spontan..majoritatea poeziilor pe care le-am scris le-am sters...nu au cine stie ce insemnatate pentru mine :-|

; Asta de mai sus am scris-o acum in...4 min max. Nu are cine stie ce sens...incercati sa va imaginati o multime de oameni care asteapta curajosi moartea, si dupa ce dispar toti, totul e calm, iar la sfarsit aflam ca totul a fost un vis, si ca e momentul sa dezlantuim haosul : :lol:

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